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PEANUT AND CRACKER JACK April 14, 2015

Posted by cynosurer in Uncategorized.
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A disgraced coach gets a second chance but must teach couch-potato kids about baseball and life to win a championship trophy, a trophy wife, and the apple of his eye.

 

 

FIRST OFFICIAL DRAFT -needs a lot of work still.

Peanut and Cracker Jack

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1. cynosurer - April 19, 2015

I just got back from my Bluecat Screenwriting Workshop in Nashville that confirmed my suspicion that this first draft (which I rushed to finish for the workshop is a bogged down mess. I have a lot of work to do. Babies will die. On the positive side there was a lot they liked about it.

So, back to work.

I highly recommend you take advantage of Gordy Hoffman’s workshops when it comes to a town near you.


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